Promotional Statement !!

My name is Georgie Spall. I would consider myself a dedicated performer who believes in the importance of punctuality and commitment. I have been involved in several drama groups since the age of 8 where I was taught a range of versatile skills in order to aid my understanding of different theatrical styles such as naturalism, comedy and modernism. My passion for the arts has led me to a number of incredible opportunities such as performing in the Royal Albert Hall and playing lead roles in musicals like 'School of Rock' and 'Guys and Dolls'. After being surrounded by like-minded individuals for so long, I would say that my confidence and communication skills have flourished, enabling me to thrive in collaborative environments. In addition to acting, my interest for the arts can also be shown through my musical abilities, including playing the clarinet in jazz bands and school orchestras, as well as singing. In my opinion, my talents in music and literature have increased my level of creativity, allowing me to be more open minded, particularly when sharing ideas. As an actor, my main goal is to show my love for the beauty of theatre with audiences whilst I am on stage.

First draft:

https://youtu.be/k6nyH7C8gWg

Feedback I received from my peers:

- I seemed very confident 

- Professional setting due to the white background

- Slight hesitation on two occasions but no 'ums or ahs'

- Good eye contact with the camera

- I should smile more as I don't seem very passionate about drama

- Learn my paragraph better

 

Peer Feedback ONE   - __Stanley Russell_____________________

Overall impression
Next interview would ask for passion in area. Look more happy and less stressed.
Confidence demonstrated?	Yes
Presentation format professional in nature? If NOT what can be improve?	Professional setting, blank wall
Clear and Concise?	Spoke sentences clearly, understood
Looking straight at the camera? Good eye contact?	Most of the time, very good eye contact
Free of hesitations or uhms and aghs?	yes
Good annunciation and diction?	Yes I sound British
Intonation – not a monotone presentation?	Vary more pitch, however good usually

 

Peer Feedback TWO   - Dee Lindsay _______________________

Overall impression
Confident and clearly not using cue. One fumble towards the end which stood out.
Confidence demonstrated?	Yes
Presentation format professional in nature? If NOT what can be improve?	Yes
Clear and Concise?	Yes, throughout
Looking straight at the camera? Good eye contact?	Yes
Free of hesitations or uhms and aghs?	Yes
Good annunciation and diction?	Yes
Intonation – not a monotone presentation?	Yes

 

Second draft:

https://youtu.be/1VjV9cT6nKg